magazine draft no.1

This is the first draft of my magazine. It is not a completed work and is simply a way of viewing my sketches in a more realistic format. To change this, I will be editing my front page image and altering the background.The contents page needs filling up, and the design of the twitter and Facebook section needs rethinking. Altogether the page is too cramped but does not contain enough to fill both pages and the connotations of a rock magazine display that a 1 page contents page is more common than two.
The page featuring photo's taken of the band appear to be a nice idea, although it could work over one page and not two. The pull quote used is a nice quote from the articles interview, although it does not seem to relate enough to the page.
The double page spread needs a lot of work, as the photos used need to display all band members together as a group and not as 3 separate artists. The writing is also not visible enough with the background being an image. I will need to redo the entire page soon.